Since the preceding post is long, I intend not to change it even within the 24 hours I usually give myself after posting and instead point out potential issues to be corrected in separate posts like this one.
Anyway, this is a series I call "I Noticed This" to point out that I recognized a potential issue and intend to work on it
This first one is related to the "Connecting Through The First Comma" part and is related to how I might have contradicted myself when I refused to count in the concept in the actual thing when it comes to affecting the next part but I counted it in as a reason to prevent that actual part from surviving the first comma.
Also, without the first comma the part of the Amendment before the second comma would probably be just a reference to an actual well regulated Militia not either just concept or an actual one like I said.
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